Not sure how I stumbled upon this but I’m glad I did. The first “scene” perhaps felt more like a filler, but this argument they’re having about the choices made… and an uploadable soul… that caught me. Curious to see how this develops ->
Really enjoyed this. Great first line. Interesting premise.
I often think about digital uploading of minds, which raise major philosophical quandaries, and I'm eager to see the issue tackled from a new angle. Personally, I think a perfect digital recreation of my brain would constitute immortality - but also think it is much harder than usually imagined, and essentially impossible in principle.
I love this as the start of a serial! Looking forward to reading more about Sister Lucia - I like her already. I always love a story that has a unique belief system.
I read your mid chapter it was good even though at that time didn't even read the first chapter. But now after reading it, it's so good it's exciting thanks
I’m so excited for this! What an interesting concept for the future!
😱😱 thank you so much for reading!!
Not sure how I stumbled upon this but I’m glad I did. The first “scene” perhaps felt more like a filler, but this argument they’re having about the choices made… and an uploadable soul… that caught me. Curious to see how this develops ->
Ahhh thank you for reading!! 💜 I’m glad it intrigued you!
Great start (and the first line is 🔥. Looking forward to reading more!
Ahhh thank you Terence! 💜
Great, intriguing start! I loved it.
Welcome to the House of Chapters! Look out for Story Highlights Week #3!
Thank you for including this little sci-fi in the highlights and the House of Chapters 🙌
This was a fun story. I'm definitely intrigued by the world and how this religion fits into it!
Thank you for reading!! 💜 Truly appreciate it 😊
Really enjoyed this. Great first line. Interesting premise.
I often think about digital uploading of minds, which raise major philosophical quandaries, and I'm eager to see the issue tackled from a new angle. Personally, I think a perfect digital recreation of my brain would constitute immortality - but also think it is much harder than usually imagined, and essentially impossible in principle.
Thank you so much for reading!! 💜
And very true! The concept has always baffled me. It’s wild to think we could live to see it become reality one day 🤔
I hope you want typos pointed out, like I do.
"making the patient's rather large family, for this day and age, to rush"
Looks like it used to be "causing to rush"; now it's "making to rush". The "to" seems wrong.
Enjoying it but can't turn my editor off.... Back to reading!
Thank you for pointing it out! 💜 No need to turn off the editor in you, it always helps 🙌
I love this as the start of a serial! Looking forward to reading more about Sister Lucia - I like her already. I always love a story that has a unique belief system.
Emily! Thank you so much for reading 💜 Hope you like the rest of the story as well!
Brilliant start! Your writing is comfortable on the eyeballs 👀 ❤️
Ahh thank you for the lovely compliment! 🙌
Nice! Crisp and intriguing start. I'll be coming back to read the rest!
Thank you!! 💜 Hope you enjoy the story!
Okay! Im very intrigued.
I’m thrilled that you are 🤭🙌
I'm hooked.
🤭🙌
OK, first chapter down, let's go to the others! 😉
Woohoo!! Let’s go 🙌
I read your mid chapter it was good even though at that time didn't even read the first chapter. But now after reading it, it's so good it's exciting thanks
Ahhh thank you so much 💜 This made my day!
Also apologies for not getting to your comment fast enough!
Loved the opening lines! Brb finding the subscribe button.
Ahhh I’m truly honored! Thank you for reading and subscribing 💜🥹
I think I only made it 600 words in before I hit subscribe. Very much looking forward to this one.
Thank you!! This means the world to me 💜😊